J. Haux

potato

crisp

We even included a card game...Go Fish, I think. I just made my first post today. I felt daring. :wink: And hesitant, too. I haven't posted anything recent, or even ...

Okay, I guess I'll wait for the update.

8/10

I'm not a poet, but I went through a phase in early middle-school in which I liked to write lymericks. This is my first post here-I thought I might as ...

You know what's funny? Some friends and I did exactly the same thing...most of it anyway. We did it with Harry Potter too, only it was a musical. :wink: ~Jacquie~

I found a nickle, and the twelve dollars that were in a secret compartment in my pocket yesterday... Someone threw a stinkbomb at school...but that didn't make me very happy, ...

Beatles

drilling

dictionary :wink:

design

spinning

You're right. It wasn't written very well, but it can be improved. The average 12-year-old writer would have written like this, although my little sister is a very good writer--she's ...

Ooo...really? You want us to? *evil laugh* Ah...I'll get to it later...It's late. I will say you need to learn proper dialogue punctuation. It's something people don't seem to know, ...